I admire people like Olga and Robbie, who make writing a wonderful review seem like child’s play. I struggle with reviews, and I feel bad, because I like supporting the authors whose work I enjoy. As anyone familiar with this blog already knows, I am a long-time fan of Teagan Geneviene. I love reading her serial stories on her blog, and I’ve bought many of her books, including the “bookized” versions of those stories. That said, I think I’ve written precisely one review (which is one more than I’ve written for most authors).
When I read good reviews, I marvel at how the writers share information and emotion without giving away too much. I find that difficult. I find it even harder for “Dead of Winter” since the epic novel is being presented in wonderful, albeit novella length monthly Journeys. I don’t how Teagan does that. Not only does she have to figure out where to make the breaks, in order to compartmentalize the story, she has to keep our interest from month to month, journey to journey – she does both with apparent ease. And, she has to create a new cover each month, but we all know how well she does that. When the times comes that I need a book cover, I know where I’m going.
Teagan is nine journeys into the adventure, and I think it’s about time that I say something.
What is it that I like most about Dead of Winter?
I like the world Teagan has created and the fact that the realm of the living is barely separated from the realm of the dead. I love the fantastic notion that the heroine can travel past that barrier – not that it’s always something she wants to do. The places, the forces of nature, the ruins and the wagons – as a woodworker, I am seriously impressed with the wagons. And Teagan hasn’t just built a world like a Hollywood prop, she knows the history of her world, and how power has moved from people to people, how buildings have been destroyed and how the dead are to be feared. I joke about the wagons, but the people whose story Teagan is sharing are on a journey of their own, and the wagons and horses are important.
What do I like about Teagan’s writing?
I so admire Teagan’s ability to describe places, things and events and I am constantly amazed at her ability to create characters that are alive to me. After eight journeys, I feel I have spent an afternoon getting to know Emlyn, Mercedes, Osabide, Tajin and Zasha and so many others.
Emlyn is the star of this story. I have feared for her safety. I have learned by her side, and I have done a virtual fist bump as she has escaped from those who would have her killed for her thoughts and dreams. Osabide, the teacher is a wonderful woman, someone I think I would trust the instant I met her. Tajin, the swordsman leaves me in awe of his prowess and makes me wonder about his past and his future. Mercedes is a font of knowledge about the past. A member of the Deae Matres – a society of women on a mission to preserve knowledge. Zasha, perhaps my favorite character. At first, I was jealous of her (on behalf of Emlyn) but I have grown to enjoy the scenes where she is featured.
Did I just say I was jealous of a character in a book?
Yes, I did. That’s how powerful Teagan’s writing is. That’s how closely I was drawn into the story.
How does this serial thing work as opposed to reading a big, long book?
It’s hard for me to answer this. The epic stories I’ve read were all assignments for a high school or college class. I can’t think of a fiction book as long as this would be that I’ve read in recent years. I think the serial process works. I love starting and finishing a new Journey each month. Teagan has left us hanging a few times, but that’s ok.
If you haven’t yet read any of the Journeys of Dead of Winter, or if you read one or two and stopped, click yourself to Amazon and get started or get caught up. You will not regret doing that.
Thanks to Teagan for supplying the images from the Journeys. To those of you in the US, I hope you’re enjoying the long Labor Day weekend.
Hi Dan, you’ve done a great job with this overview of Teagan’s journey’s. She is a very talented writer and her three things approach amazes me. I hope you had a wonderful long weekend.
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Thanks Robbie. Teagan is an amazing writer. I am in awe of her ability. I am in awe of your ability to craft a good review, without spoilers.
I hope you have a nice week.
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Thank you, Dan. I am flattered.
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Thank you kindly, Robbie. I’m so glad that you are a part of the Journeys. Have a beautiful new week. Hugs on the wing!
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I admire anyone who can write a story, let alone anything so complicated! A very interesting review — I am especially intrigued by “The Three.” I also love the puddle with Maddie and the tree, and, no, I’m sure I couldn’t resist! I hope you too are enjoying your long weekend.
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Thanks. The I forgot to mention is that she wrote this epic story in the first place. While I can babble on endlesly, crafting a long complex story is a daunting task.
Maddie seems to like those puddles. She always goes to it, and I try to get her to stand still to capture her reflection. And, I can never resist that foot.
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Thanks very much, Maureen. I’m trying not to give anything away, so I’m choosing my words carefully… “The Three” is an element of the story that is mysterious for several installments. However, it relates to the relationship between three main characters, Emlyn (the heroine), Osabide, and Zasha. It is also tied to the history of Emlyn’s world, an ancient prophecy, and very loosely inspired by some of my real-world research.
I wouldn’t be able to resist MiMi’s foot either. =^-^= Hugs on the wing!
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I think you did an outstanding job of doing a review for Teagan’s serial. I too struggle with them, that’s why I don’t post very many.
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I’m glad I’m not alone, GP. I found it a little easier now that she’s nine Journeys in, but I still struggled.
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I know Teagan is more than pleased!!
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GP, I agree. I rarely do the kind of in-depth reviews at which some people are so good. It’s a very particular skill set. Dan did a fabulous job, and I’m honored to be the recipient.
I hope you’re having a wonderful Labor Day. Hugs on the wing!
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You did a fabulous review, Dan! I’m now intrigued. Maybe I will check out the books , I love the artwork as well! Did she commission that from elsewhere?
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Thanks Kim. Teagan creates the composite images for the covers. If you cruise through her portfolio page, you will be amazed (I know I was).
I have enjoyed each of the books in this series, as well as the way the whole story emerges with each new Journey.
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Thanks, Dan. I will check her out when I have time!
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Hi, Kim. I agree about Dan’s review, and I’m thrilled.
Thanks about the covers. Yes, I create the covers and the black and white interior images myself. I call them image collages, but I do a lot of “computer art” to the individual parts… and then to the final as well. It has been a challenge to make so many covers for this story — to make each one different, yet similar enough to the rest of the group. But I love doing it.
Thanks for reading and commenting. Hugs on the wing!
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That’s a talent! Thank you for the hugs! 🤗
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Your review is wonderful, Dan. You didn’t give away any storyline, but managed to say to a reader: ‘You see why I love these books?!’ So well done! I (reluctantly) wrote a review one time for a friend who asked me to. I am not good at that at all, but she insisted. I struggled, but did write it. Don’t you know she told me she was gonna change it–why didn’t she just write it in the first place?!
I LOVE the ‘are you coming?’ photo of Maddie. She looks beautiful. Have a great week.
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Thanks Lois. I had to laugh at your experience – “I’m gonna change it…” Seriously, why not just listen to me?
Once Maddie knows were going to go outside and sit, she wants us to be there. She waits for me to sit, and then she lays down. Sometimes, I take too long (putting down my coffee, phone, newspaper, etc.)
Have a great week, too.
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Oh, that’s groan-worthy, Lois. Even when someone gets a story element wrong, I don’t ask them to change a review. I’m just pleased that a story can touch different parts of the imagination in different people. (The only time I’ve ever taken any action about a review was for a different series. Someone posted a positive review, but then through and revealed every single “surprise” element in the story. Even then I didn’t go to the reviewer. I asked the hosting site to put a spoiler alert on the review.)
I’m on cloud nine about Dan’s review. Thanks very much for reading and commenting. Hugs on the wing!
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For someone who struggles with reviews (I do too by the way), that was impressive.
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Thanks.
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I don’t see myself as being good at reviews either, Bob. I’m delighted with Dan’s entire post. It’s easy to see that he put a lot of thought into it. Thanks for reading and commenting. Hugs on the wing!
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I hope I get a review like this one day. You make it feel like the adventure it was meant to be. 👏🏻👏🏻
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If I don’t give you a review, you can start serving me Coors instead of Corona. Thanks Cheryl. The book really is a grand adventure.
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Haha! It’a deal, Dan. It sounds exciting.
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Dan did a fantastic job, Cheryl. It really made my month. Stay safe and well. Happy writing. Hugs on the wing!
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A beautiful review, Dan. Congratulations to Teagan
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Thanks John.
Happy Labor Day.
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And to you, Dan
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Thanks very much, John. I hope you’re having a splendid September and a wonderful Labor Day. Stay happy and sassy. Hugs on the wing!
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Thank you, Teagan. Yes, sassy is the key word. Hugs.
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That was a very great review of Teagan’s work, Dan!
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Thanks Deborah!
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Thanks, Deborah. I’m totally psyched! Now I need to get busy on Journey 10. LOL. Happy Labor Day. Hugs on the wing!
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Great review, Dan. Teagan is so talented and I am sure she appreciates your review.
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Thanks Maggie. Teagan gives us so much entertainment value throughout the year, I was happy to be able to do this,
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Oh, indeed I do appreciate it, Maggie. Knowing that Dan doesn’t feel great about doing reviews, I was actually surprised that he did a review post. He really went above and beyond. Especially to make a slide show of my book-interior images. I really am honored.
Thanks for reading and commenting. Hugs on the wing!
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I was happy to read his review. I have been lousy at reading during the pandemic, but his review is tempting me. I always love the magic you create.
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I can relate to that, Maggie. In writing I create my place to escape from the bad things in the world. Dead of Winter is much more serious than the whimsy I’ve been compelled to write in recent years. But it was still my reaction to and escape from the culture (and climate) shock of moving to DC. Whether you read, garden, take photos, or what, I hope you can do something that takes you to a relaxing escape. Hugs.
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Thank you, Teagan. 😊
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Dan, you treasure! Even though it’s only the 6th day of the month, I think I can safely say that you’ve totally made my September. Truthfully, I’m thrilled if somebody just says “I really liked this story and I liked ___.” and gives 5 stars. To me, that’s a review. You have gone above and beyond. This works great as a comprehensive review of the series. I’m honored, especially by all the thought you put into it.
Thanks for making the slide show of my book-interior images. Your gallery was a delight as always. LOL, Maddie really did look impatient. I think I will save this to reblog as my midweek post. Hugs on the wing!
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You’re welcome, Teagan. I really should be thanking you for all the work you put into bringing this story (and your other projects) yo us. You give us lots to enjoy each week.
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My pleasure, Dan. But this post is really amazing. I hope you have a lovely and relaxing Labor Day.
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Happy Labor Day to you too, Dan. I hope you’re not laboring today, at least at anything that isn’t enjoyable. I understand how you feel about book reviews. There are so many books that I love and have read multiple times but have never reviewed. Teagan’s books sound like something my sci-fi/fantasy-loving husband would enjoy. As usual, I enjoyed your photos. :-)
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Thank you kindly, Janet. “Dead of Winter” is a high fantasy. I focused on the world building and characters. The fantasy element escalates gradually. There’s magic and ghosts, but it is not heavy on the “sword and sorcery” type of fantasy.
Happy Labor Day. Hugs on the wing!
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I wouldn’t even call myself a serious fan of fantasy, Janet, but I enjoy well-told stories and Teagan excels at storytelling. By the end of each month, I’m waiting for the next Journey to arrive.
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Teagan would be proud Dan. You have told us just enough to be intrigued and tantalized. Job well done.
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Thanks Pam. The books are wonderful.
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Pam, yes I am proud of Dan — and honored, flattered, and just wowed. Thanks for reading and commenting. Hugs on the wing!
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Always appreciated my friend. And returned.
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Great review Dan! Glad you guys survived the storm!
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Thanks Jan
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Thanks for reading and commenting, Jan. Hugs on the wing!
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What a wonderful review, Dan! Thanks for the mention, but I am sure many authors wish you would review their books as well, because you clearly only review a book when it means a lot to you, and that’s something that comes through, and other readers will appreciate. I share your feelings about the journeys, and I’m ever so happy we still have a few more journeys left. In any case, I’m sure we’ll remember Dead of Winter and its characters for a long time to come. I hope you do write some other reviews in the future, because I’m sure other readers will appreciate your opinion (and the authors as well). Stay safe and thanks for all the inspiration. ♥
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Thanks Olga I was less nervous about this, since it isn’t over yet. I didn’t feel like I could spoil anything. I have been so interested in the story as it evolves. It was easy to sing Teagan’s praises here. I am glad we still have several Journeys to go.
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Thanks for your encouraging words, Olga. You’ve been such a fountain of support throughout the Journeys. I’m happy that you are a part of them. Hugs on the wing.
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Great review – it is a skill, or is it an art? I have been reading Teagan’s latest, and it is hilarious. And I’m also in awe of her writing Teagan explained to me she is a “panster” (hope I’ve spelt it correctly) and wow !!!
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How wonderful to see you here, Cecily. Dan has a terrific blog, with a different theme for each day. Heartfelt thanks for your encouragement. I’m happy you are aboard the “TROLLEY” for The Armadillo Files. Hugs on the wing!
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Thanks. I think it’s a mix that leans toward art. I read reviews by others and I’m often amazed. Teagan’s writing is also amazing.
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This is great! I am always begging friends and family for book recommendations. Just downloaded Journey 1. 😊
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Annie, you gem. That’s music to my ears. Welcome to the Journeys. I hope you love it. That first one is particularly short. The rest are around 100 pages, give or take… sometimes more. Amazon will tell you how long each one is in their descriptions about halfway down the page. Hugs on the wing!
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I’m glad. I think you will enjoy it.
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You did a wonderful job writing this review, Dan. Your review is lively and shows how much you were into the world and characters of the book. I agree with you that Teagan “knows the history of her world, and how power has moved from people to people, how buildings have been destroyed and how the dead are to be feared.” I know how much research she’s done when writing her books. The presentation of your review is a delightful read.
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Thanks Miriam. I wanted to do something before she finished the story 🙂
I am so impressed at how she is able to tell the story and have the places and people come to life.
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Thanks, Miriam. Dan really made it look easy — a sure sign of capability and preparedness. Thanks for reading and commenting. Hugs on the wing!
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Yes, Teagan. Dan made it look easy. I’m happy for you💖.
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I’m greatly enjoying The Dead of Winter journey too and don’t want it to end! Like you, I appreciate Teagan’s ability describe interesting settings and characters who are like dear friends. The dipolomatic Mercedes is my favorite.The stories are easy to read, yet not simple. There is depth in the characters and their struggles. I love that a group of intelligent and adventurous women rescued young Emlyn from the oppression and danger of an archaic male dominated culture. Maybe I should copy this to start my own review!
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No, wait! Osabide, Emlyn’s mentor is my favorite. Along with Mercedes. :)
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Ha ha – it’s hard, isn’t it.
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Yes, it is hard to pick one favorite, especially as I learn more about each character.
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You should! Those are the kind of things I wish I could pack into a short succinct review.
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I have a rough draft started. :)
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JoAnna, it makes my day for a reader to choose a favorite character — and even more so if they have more than one. :) What you said here would make an excellent review that I would be proud to have! Hugs from Mercedes and Osabide — and me.
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I’ve got a rough draft started and will be keeping this in mind as I read. Hugs to all of you, including the horses. I love how you give the horses personality. Adding that to my draft…
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Haha. I think Firelance gets up to no-good whenever he gets a chance.
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The horses, the wagons – who would think that these things could come alive in a story.
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I guess they’re already alive to me when I write them. I can almost feel them — the size, the fur, the snorts. ;)
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[…] a review. I’m sharing a terrific example of writing outside your comfort zone. Dan Antion at No Facilities is always saying that he is not comfortable writing reviews. He rose to the challenge. That makes […]
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Fabulous review. I, too, am reading Teagan’s Dead of Winter serial, and I agree that she creates and describes wonderful worlds!
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Thanks Priscilla. I’ve been enjoying the series very much.
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You’re a gem to visit both places, Priscilla. I treasure your reviews too. Stay safe and well. Hugs on the wing!
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Wonderful review. I really like how you have personalized the characters. I may borrow that trick for some future review of one of Teagan’s Journeys. As a librarian, I have fallen in love with the Deae Matres.
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I can see how the society would appeal to a librarian. I spend my career in Information Management, so I also appreciate their mission. I appreciate your comments about the review. This approach helped get me moving.
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Thanks for visiting both blogs, Pat. I’m happy you enjoy the Journeys. Hugs on the wing.
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Glad to assist another info pro. Keep up the good work.
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Excellent review, Dan. You outdid yourself! And Teagan is right that authors appreciate every single review, even if it’s only one sentence long. I think this one had her doing a happy dance. A great serial that she can be proud of. ;-D
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Thanks Diana. I’m glad this worked so well. I am really enjoying this series, and I wanted to share that.
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It came through loud and clear, Dan. I have journey 9 on my kindle ready to go. :-)
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Dancing like Snoopy again. <3
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Ha ha.
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Haha — it really did, Diana. Thanks so much for visiting both blogs. Dance like nobody’s watching!
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:-)
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Excellent, Dan!
I’m not a book reviewer either. However, once in awhile, I give it a go like you did…. my way.
I’ve just begun 3. I’m enjoying the journey!
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Resa, you do amazing feature posts. I’m happy that you’re part of the Journeys. Hugs on the wing.
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Thanks Resa. I am enjoying the journeys so much.
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What a great post and topic, Teagan! I’m realizing that many readers feel the same way as I do about writing reviews. Each time I gear up for the task, I get nervous. But thanks for referring to Chris’ post too because his advice was exceptionally helpful. And Dan’s review on your books was fantastic! It’s great to know that we can toss some of that pressure we’ve put on ourselves. I know I’ve been grateful for the reviews I’ve received on my books, and like I wrote on Chris’ blog, the bottom line is to help out the authors. By the way, I’ll soon begin Journey 5. :)
Lauren 💗
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Holy Hannah, you are really catching up, Lauren. Wow! The fifth one is unique in the series, with all the ghostly vignettes at the beginning. However, each of them gives a glimpse into different areas of the big world that Emlyn eventually ventures into.
Dan did such a relatable review, it’s uniquely his style. I really am honored.
Thank you for being part of the journeys. Hugs on the wing.
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Thanks! The reaction to this post has inspired me to leave some simpler reviews on books for the authors whose writing I enjoy. I know the actual reviews on the sites like Amazon do more good for the author, so I will try more often.
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Love that you did this for Teagan! I also am a huge fan!! Your review was great and I am in awe of writers reviews on each other. So back to your review: loved it and it summarized the serial very well!! Once I start reading any of her writing….I can’t put it down! I started and finished 6 on a flight we just took from LA to Seattle. I know I’m slightly behind, but love each installment!!
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I’m glad, Kirt. I’ve been reading from the beginning, and I love the story.
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Wow, Kirt. That is so kind of you. I get a kick out of the Journeys being in the air like that. “Journey 7, Revenant Pass” begins with a high action backstory. Thanks for your encouragement. Hugs on the wing!
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What can I say….I’m a fan!!
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