I chose to participate in the Dickens Challenge this year, hosted by Marsha, Trent and Yvette. While I still have some time left before the challenge ends on the anniversary of Charles Dickens’ death (June 9th) I am running late, so I decided to mention two of the novellas I’ve read (I’m still reading “A Christmas Carol”) for this monthly feature.

The Haunted Man and the Ghost’s Bargain

When I started reading this novella, I didn’t know it was a Christmas story, and I didn’t know Dickens had written five Christmas stories. I was proud of myself for knowing that he had written one.

This novella brings the reader through a bargain, from the point of wishing it could happen, to the point of despair that it had happened and following the hope that it can be reversed, but not really understanding why.

Professor Redlaw, is a chemistry professor and a man who appears to be a man of means, with servants to whom we are introduced. Redlaw obsesses with his past, and the wrongs he perceives have been done to him. The memories haunt him. He encounters a spirit who offers to help him by eliminating his memory. Redlaw agrees. His memories are eliminated, and he is given the power to pass this “gift” to others, but not a great measure of control over that process.

We learn, along with the professor, that the gift he now possesses is more of a curse. We learn how important memories, even bad memories, are.

May I tell you why it seems to me a good thing for us, to remember wrong that has been done us?”

“Yes.”

“That we may forgive it.”

Charles Dickens

The novella got off to a slow start. Dickens can be hard to read when there isn’t some action dragging you through the language. But, typical of his other stories I’ve read, once the story picked up some steam, it was hard to put down.

The Cricket on the Hearth – A Fairy Tale of Home

This is another of Dickens’ Christmas stories and it’s the first one I read, although I am familiar with A Christmas Carol as most people are. The Cricket on the Hearth is also a bit of a mystery, a romance and the cricket adds a slightly paranormal element to the story, as he chirps when things are going well, but remains silent when they are not.

The story met with great success when originally published, but apparently has fallen out of favor in modern times. From what I’ve read, that may be due to some unfortunate attempts to bring the story to life in video form. It may also be because people expect stories, like everything else in their lives, to move faster now.

Some people complain about the descriptions Dickens gives of the characters and the house, but I found them delightful. Early in the story, the descriptions are of sounds, and you can’t help but hear them in your mind. His descriptions of characters are equally charming.

“She was of a spare and straight shape, this young lady, insomuch that her garments appeared to be in constant danger of sliding off those sharp pegs, her shoulders, on which they were loosely hung.”

Charles Dickens

The story presents a few twists and turns, and I shared the doubt with some of the characters. In the end, a feeling of redemption saves the day, and a transformation not unlike that found at the end of A Christmas Carol.

In both books, Dickens demonstrates an ability of which I am jealous. He repeats descriptions for emphasis. He dwells on these descriptions. If I tried doing that, my readers would toss my story on the floor. Dickens does it in a way that captivates. I enjoyed both novellas and I enjoyed the challenge.

And just a few photos.

50 responses to “Two by Dickens – #Dickenschallenge”

  1. Well done Dan! :-)

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  2. I haven’t read Dickens since I was a child, but I only recently picked up a 3-story collection of his.

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    1. I’ve had access to (the Editor’s) collection for years. This is the first time I’ve actually sat down and read some of his stories. It’s fun to get into a different time.

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      1. True. Then you probably would like, Ken Follett’s “Pillars of the Earth”.

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  3. Murphy’s Law Avatar
    Murphy’s Law

    Dan, I just can’t get into Dickens. I’ve tried, but no go! I applaud your effort and determination.

    Old Glory is always ready and never camera shy!
    Ginger

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    1. I found both of these to be slow to start, but I was determined, and I did enjoy both. Sometimes, you need that pressure of a book report being due tomorrow ;-)

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  4. I love Dickens! I know his sentences start out in Maine and end up in California, but I love them. I try to read the Christmas section of “Pickwick Papers” every holiday season and then I inevitably end up reading to the end of the book. Dickens is not known for his humor, I know, but “Pickwick” is hilarious. But then I was an English major. It’s lovely to find your reviews!

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    1. That’s a great description of his sentences. I haven’t read the Pickwick Papers. Maybe come December, I’ll give that a shot.

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      1. If nothing else, read the part about Christmas at Dingley Dell. I also love the names in Dickens — who wouldn’t want to spend Christmas in a place called Dingley Dell?

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  5. Dickens’s descriptions of his characters is half the fun of reading his books! Those character desciptions are pure entertainment.

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    1. I do enjoy his descriptions.

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  6. Excellent multiple review, Dan! It’s not always easy to get into the rhythm of 19th-century fiction, but it can be very rewarding — as you skillfully conveyed.

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    1. Dickens, always seems to require a bit of a push at the beginning. Maybe it’s settling into the time, but I always end up enjoying the story. Thanks Dave.

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  7. With the exception of A Christmas Carol, I admire Dickens more than I love him. Nevertheless, he is one of the great writers of his times, and his use of language certainly is a reflection of his times.

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    1. I enjoy reading him now and then. I love the language of the time.

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  8. Deborah Zajac Avatar
    Deborah Zajac

    Yeah, you finished the original challenge! I confess reading 3 was more challenging than I thought it would be. I’ve finished two of three Dicken’s Novella’s and am in process of reading The Cricket on the Hearth for the 3rd book. The two I read first were very similar. I was need of a break from Dickens so am taking a break and reading a Sci-Fi novel now, but I will try to finish the 3rd book maybe before the deadline. 😀

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    1. I saved A Christmas Carol until last. I know I can finish that. Sci-Fi is a good break from Dickens.

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  9. Great reviews, Dan. We have to remember that Dickens wrote in a different time when books were one of the few ways to escape the realities of the day. Descriptions were very important in abiding this escape. Today we writers are competing with everything under the sun that readers use for escape. They want their books to move them but to do it quickly. So you are right. Writing like Dickens will get you tossed before page ten. Super photos

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    1. That’s a good point, John. There are way too many places for people to escape today.

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  10. I’m guessing we had to read Dickens in high school, but I’m not sure. There were two different English teachers my freshman year. One was the cool nun who had her class diagraming Manfred Mann songs and reading classics. The other was the uncool nun who also taught German and had a speech impediment. Guess who was not diagramming songs?

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    1. Haha – Oh, Lois. You paid a heavy price to get that diploma.

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      1. Oh, yes and I will say ‘Gesundheit’ when you sneeze. 😆😂

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  11. I hadn’t known about the book, The Haunted Man and the Ghost’s Bargain, before. I downloaded an e-copy of it at Amazon.

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    1. I didn’t know about it until I started this challenge. It’s an interesting premise.

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  12. Dan, thanks so much for the introduction to these two books! I had only heard of Cricket on the Hearth but never read it and didn’t know the other. I’m adding these to the bottom of my list. (I have a much more important book to read first) I love descriptives and they really make the story real for me. I love being transported to places to get lost in the tale.
    That bunny looks like it needs a nest pronto. 🙂

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    1. Thanks Cheryl. I wouldn’t ask to be placed ahead of Charles Dickens, but I don’t think he’s in a hurry anymore ;-) His descriptions will bring you back through time.

      We have some baby bunnies running around, so I’m not sure who needs the nest.

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      1. Awww… post Easter bunnies. Now a writer who knew about descriptives was Hemingway. Wow. But I loved A Farewell to Arms.

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  13. I haven’t read these two books of Dicken’s and must fix that. I love reading him from time to time. Great reviews. Thanks.

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    1. From time to time is how I am with Dickens. I couldn’t deal with a steady diet, but it’s a fun diversion now and then.

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  14. Love Dickens, Dan. Thank you for joining he #Dickenschallenge!

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    1. This was my pleasure, Rebecca.

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  16. I have not read those stories! I should rectify that. I do love Dickens.

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  17. nice job Dan! I find him hard to read too but I know that Marsha and Yvette were thrilled you participated~ You did a great job! 👏

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    1. Thanks Cindy. Once I get going, I really enjoy the stories. I guess it takes a bit to get back into the 19th century.

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      1. You’re so welcome Dan. I will have to try to give them a go eventually! 💞

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  18. HI DAn, I have tried to read The Haunted Man three times with little success, but I will give it one more go next week. I enjoyed The Cricket on the Heart and the other three stories. I have to post my review for The Battle of Life. I hoped to this week but I’ve had not time at all.

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    1. You are a very busy woman, Robbie. The Haunted Man started slow, but I liked it once it started moving.

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      1. I finished Hotel on the Corner of Bitter and Sweet today. It was so amazing I am still contemplating it and haven’t started anything new yet.

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  19. I love this, “I was proud of myself for knowing that he had written one.” I was too! Dan, these are wonderful, thoughtful reviews. I loved the quote about forgiveness. I think that is the crux of the book, really. I also love the description. Wouldn’t it be funny if we did describe people more like he described the woman’s thin frame? We used to laugh at a friend of ours trying to describe a very heavy-set woman so that we would know who he meant. He finally settled on “husky built,” and we laughed until tears flowed. I, too, love how he repeated things, which gave character to flat characters. The old man with the green memory was 87 years old. Will we ever forget how old he was or that he prided himself on his memory? It was interesting that at the end he came forth with a very helpful memory about the situation Redlaw was troubled about. Excellent reviews. Good luck finishing the Christmas Carol, and wish me the same. I’m going to have to hustle. :)

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    1. Good luck to us both, Marsha. I don’t think we could write like this today, but it’s good to read and reread someone who did it so well. Thanks for reading this and commenting.

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      1. Amen to that, Dan. It’s a different style for a different era, but there is much to emulate in places. Thanks for writing and linking your posts. :)

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  20. Hi, Dan – I smiled when you mentioned your jealousy of Dickens. Even though I don’t write or publish outside of my blog, I felt the exact same way! :D

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    1. I think it’s why I do enjoy rereading his work.

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